Not bad for a beginner
However, I'd just like to point out there are plenty of beginning voice actors, who will join anything for exp! As to the toon, the heads are good, but I very much recommend some work on the bodies, rather a turn off.
Not bad for a beginner
However, I'd just like to point out there are plenty of beginning voice actors, who will join anything for exp! As to the toon, the heads are good, but I very much recommend some work on the bodies, rather a turn off.
Really? I think the bodies match the heads just fine. :) Besides, those are just the default bodies.
Not bad for a first.
And you're ambitious to start with frame by frame. Only things I'd suggest is practice, and slow it down a bit so you can see whats happening. The ending was awesome.
Hmm...
10/10 for comedy, 4/10 for art/animation.
Pretty funny...
Nice charachtars, but you should improve a bit on animation. And while i'm not gay, I'm finding the reveiws a bit scary. I mean one guy way down there actually said gays are societies downfall! Take it easy people, this is supposed to be a friendly community.
I don't think Newgrounds was ever a friendly community >_>;
Wow!
That was great for your first, and on paper. However, needs to be longer to get a ten.
on paper as in just winging it or actually on paper, cuz it was on a whiteboard...
anyways thanks for the review.
Not bad.
Not a fan of sprite movies, but this seems decent. Takes too long for anything to happen though.
i think is ok now :)
Not bad!
Not bad at all for your second flash! Keep it coming.
Thank you :]
Man, that was awesome.
I'm hoping this is a trailer for something real. Its amazing, you used shape-short animation style, and still create a work of art. Kepp up the good work man!
Wow
That was actually funny. 10/10 for story, 7/10 for animation.
Im glad you enjoyed it!
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