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Not bad for a beginner

However, I'd just like to point out there are plenty of beginning voice actors, who will join anything for exp! As to the toon, the heads are good, but I very much recommend some work on the bodies, rather a turn off.

PikaRobo responds:

Really? I think the bodies match the heads just fine. :) Besides, those are just the default bodies.

Not bad for a first.

And you're ambitious to start with frame by frame. Only things I'd suggest is practice, and slow it down a bit so you can see whats happening. The ending was awesome.

Hmm...

10/10 for comedy, 4/10 for art/animation.

Pretty funny...

Nice charachtars, but you should improve a bit on animation. And while i'm not gay, I'm finding the reveiws a bit scary. I mean one guy way down there actually said gays are societies downfall! Take it easy people, this is supposed to be a friendly community.

Nami-Tsuki responds:

I don't think Newgrounds was ever a friendly community >_>;

Wow!

That was great for your first, and on paper. However, needs to be longer to get a ten.

Cantdoright responds:

on paper as in just winging it or actually on paper, cuz it was on a whiteboard...

anyways thanks for the review.

Not bad.

Not a fan of sprite movies, but this seems decent. Takes too long for anything to happen though.

TheSin responds:

i think is ok now :)

Not bad!

Not bad at all for your second flash! Keep it coming.

Zakuga responds:

Thank you :]

Oh Please!

TRY to find a way to make this work, its the best thing in the portal I've seen in a long time! If there's any way I can help, just PM me.

Nanashi responds:

Thanks. Your support means more than you know.

Man, that was awesome.

I'm hoping this is a trailer for something real. Its amazing, you used shape-short animation style, and still create a work of art. Kepp up the good work man!

Wow

That was actually funny. 10/10 for story, 7/10 for animation.

Maxwellington responds:

Im glad you enjoyed it!

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